We have so far completed 2.41 minutes and are receiving feedback from our target audience, this is what they had to say:
Robyn- "Flowed well with the song, is at a good standard currently"
"Entertaining didn't lose interest in the story"
"Could do with some more transitions"
Marco- "Really good, good use of camera angles as there are a variety of them used from, panning, close ups, medium shots, long shots and powerful shots".
"Maybe an adjustment could be to make a few of the shots shorter as some of them are long"
Aileen- "Enjoyed the way in which the video flowed, had good timing with story"
Lois- "Despite the story's narrative being different the story being used works well with the song and flows"
We have looked at the criticism and the praise and are taking our target audience's opinions into consideration as their opinion is vital.